Not sure if most of u will like it coz it doesnt look like poetry at all... but here I go...
Everytime I feel the warmth of your sole
I feel wanted...and almost loved...
It is when you slam the door
That I wake up to reality
It'll never matter who I am
How I look or what I say...
I'm just the door mat in your way...
9 comments:
hey,,,is it sole or soul??
That's excellent!!!
I have updated my blog too!!!
http://technicalphilosopher.blogspot.com
http://technicalphilosopher-poems.blogspot.com
Since it means sole and soul...it gives a gr8 meaning
@ Aravind....
Its a pun actually as Karthik gets it.. Sole is the word that is literal and soul is the unspoken sense.. I hope I didnt confuse u :)
@karthik
Will check em out... and thanks
Wow!!....You're good gurly!!...Awesome meanin'!!!...
apaa rombha sole touchingaa irundhudhu ,
as always :)
:)
Nice and especially has a great and perfect conclusion
hi its nice , really
People should read this.
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